Age/Gender: 18, Male
Location: Michigan, US
Job: Student
I am a Game Programmer/Designer, Web Devolper, and make trance/dnb/techno/et c. I do use FL studio to make my music. Enjoy my music and add me on myspace! :P Fav genres: metal, hardcore, techno, trance, dnb. AlM: alertgames
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i like the bass a lot. kinda repetative though. Maybe it could be a little more change to it like go up a few notes, down a few, then back for the rest. either around 0:32 or at 0:47. That will keep the interest more, at least for me.
very nice minimal track! and underrated, but thats because to have a high rating, your music has to be less professional.
but really, this is perfect for a game/movie loop. Maybe if you explained that it is more like a loop for ambient or whatever it would be better percieved ;)
great job though! 5/5
Author's Response:
Thanks man!
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I didnt think there were too many electronic sounds except how at 2:00 that tone doesnt mix as well.
i just thought this piece had nothing interesting to it. The individual parts were cool, but together, frankly, they were not. Theres no progression, kinda a climax?
I say you have some good material here that just needs more melody construction. ;)
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i think the vocals could have some better effects and balanced more with the song. :/ Its still a pretty good song, but it could have been better ;) The song part of it sounds really nice. and balanced.
maybe its my opinion with the vocals... thats just what i thought of it. some of the effects were good, some werent as good. the vocals themself stood out from the song too much imo. Eq.
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i think theres a bit too much lyrics for my tastes but i like the one at 2:50 the most. most professional and interesting in my opinion. little weird atm though :o
Author's Response:
hmm maybe i should spread out the vocals some. yeah it is kind of a weird song.
thanks for the review, ill consider that song as well
heh really thought it was a joke though
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its great to hear some quality work on newgrounds. often either people settle for anything, or artists dont feel like submitting their work here because it is really good. (and not to mention house).
this is a great piece and I love the emotional part to it. i always like it because it really gets you into the music. If you made music like this, hell id buy your CD. i dont like many many mainstream artists in the electronic department, so in my book you are better than many.
Also, i may be wrong(as you are more devoted and talented than I am), but maybe tone down the closed hi hat a little bit. i think it takes away a little bit of the song, and makes the beat a tiny bit funky. maybe just me, but im leaning on that it does a little. if you could respond to me that would be good since im always learning more about developing music.
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i think it doesnt sound good. ummm. dont like the synths used that much. it is blended very nicely I can give you that. but the melody and sound of it dont sound like something that i would want to listen to when i want to hear house....
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it is pretty good. for my personal tastes i like the melody of this version better than the original. The only complaints about this one however is that there is a little too much reverb for ambience, and how it is missing a little bit of treble. Its good that it is limited, but the percussion seems so drawn out here(unfortunately).
So, I like the melody more, but it doesnt sound as good sound quality-wise to me. Hopefully my critique is helpful. Im trying to give as helpful feedback as i can ;)
Author's Response:
The remastered version I've done is A LOT better, I've fixed the problems you talked about.
Thanks for the review :D
Anima
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great song. I think the notes could have been a little more clear at a few points. It is nice how it is right now, I think it could be a tiny bit more dynamic, ya know? at certain parts at least. (it is good at most parts)
very nice composition
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if only you put a choir sample of the song in it(not too strong, but blended nicely), it would be KICKASS. Because everyone knows that orchestra/choir mixed upbeat music such as music, is formula for amazing feeling of a song. ;)
pretty good still though!
Author's Response:
I wish I had the EWQL Symphonic Choir. I would totally add awesome choir stuff to all my music. Oh well. Glad you liked it! Thanks :D
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very unique. very good use of samples and melody. This is really really really good work. yes it is weird, but it flows amazingly well. worth a download. I think people just think this is a weird kind of song, and which is why it is not ranked as high as it should be. better made than a lot of higher ranked material. ;)
~a
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