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needs mastering

a lot of parts just seemed really distracting because of either poor balance or too much filter, etc.

good idea, i love this tune. but yeah please fix it up a bit!

i will buy this song

when you finish this, i would buy this. its insanely good.

i swear. i want the full version.

pshhh

WAY too good for this portal...

i think its good

i think it has a nice intro, but then becomes too repetative and not as good sounding with that low saw synth that comes in around 2:30. I think it needs more balance and new melody there. Maybe deeper for that bass too.

but yeah otherwise pretty cool!

uhhh

doesnt feel mastered at all :/ the melody is kinda plain and overused.

not bad, but i dont feel it stands out as much either ;)

kirja100 responds:

This is remix = not my melody!
the original song was repetitive and boring, therefore I have decided to make a remix...
but mastering.... it because i have made this music without sound in my PC, my soundcard brokes((

zero bombers

its because the majority probably zeroes submissions if they dont "like" it. and i dont really blame some. if you arent into the genre as much then youre new to it, but a zero is stupid. The reason tom fulp or anyone else on this site dont do anything is because i think they dont care. people still use the audio portal so its not going to do much for them.

Others who zero to downrate or because they dont like the genre is stupid and this happens with DnB and House often.

Anyway, the song. Personally i dont like the style of it. but that aside, i like the choppy voice, but most the time i dont like the way it was cut. I also thought there was a lot of breaks in the song. So i guess good for certain clubs, but i dont like it as much to listen to by itself or for a flash, etc. otherwise it was well composed i felt. I just didnt like the style it was constructed in as much. :)

i liked the intro

however, i think the rough synth was a little misplaced with its melody imo. That might be what you were working on for so long lol, but yeah i liked the intro a lot. But the rest of it i just couldnt bring myself to like. Either that instrument or the drums seem out of place to me, depending on what you figure is right lol. especially nearing the ending of this one.

good work, but i think it needs some modification, especially after 0:38.

Rig responds:

Yeah, I know what you mean. I'll fix it later :P

PRESETS

all i can say is presets. yes, i guess the volume is a factor, but everything else is presets and repetative :(

its not bad... but its not that interesting either :/ also, in FL when you render, its called "wrap", and im sure with other software you can do similar.

done really well

this sounds very good! definately not my choice of melody though. Aside it from being a little "happy" of a tune, which isnt bad, I just thought that the melody construction was so so so so SO too general and common. Especially on this site...

But yeah, even though its not my favorite, it is done very well. Transitions are really good. Instruments sound perfect together, and sounds very balanced. good work!

good

lyrics are really good. who are they by?

This song doesn't open up like trance usually does. It doesnt have as much progression unfortunately. Also, i dont like the drum samples as much.

But it is a very good start and has potential with some work! good job so far

tomashcu responds:

:D!!!!!!!! thanks yeah th acapella is by DHT i THINK

im not sure, and no it does not have very much progressian at all hahah

I am a Game Programmer/Designer, Web Devolper, and make trance/dnb/techno/ etc. I do use FL studio to make my music. Fav genres: house, dnb, alt rock, dub, techno. GO TO MY GAME SITE!

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