alertG's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Depthcore - Revisted/Revised]

good!

i found this randomly while going through tracks on the NGAP.

This is a really good song, and im disappointed that this isnt getting more votes. It deserves it!

arcanedragon-2004 responds:

I guess thats what I get for using presets...Guess I need to start being more original.

[Finding That Something Special]

nice!

from about 1:00 to 2:30 was excellent! It would fit very well! Im sorry that you arent getting more exposure. I would like more exposure too :/

pitbulljones responds:

thanks for the review. Guess you like the opening sequence then? What would it fit well to though? yea i don't think anyone gets as much exposure as they deserve on here. The only way thatd work would be to have a very strong and large audio community, frequenting the forums and liasing with the flash section more. Won't happen. Shame ain't it as there are some truly phenomenal musicians on here with barely a review. I'm known by the people i want to be known about and i do have a couple of fans too, just a couple though. Thanks again.

pitters

[Battle Breaker]

mhm

even though it was pretty much a bunch of default loops with FL studio, it wasn't too bad.

Reagen-Lionel responds:

actually the loops are just sequences to play in the back ground in a certain rythme (after all thats part of the reason they are there.). The beat and melody of the refrain I did with diffrent instruments and a string or two in it. Like I said it's just a re-edit of the first song I made, just spiced it up a bit. And thank you for your input.

[Take Seven]

good!

it was really good, but that one background instrument with the long notes was very annoying. Not that you shouldn't have it in there, but maybe take it out for parts, and fade it in and out with modulation or whatever. Nice mood to it too.

That 'doo dea doo daa' was awesome. XD

joncom responds:

Ya, I like the "doo dea doo daa" too ;)

Thanks for the comments, I agree with you about the background instrument maybe being a little to "in-your-face".... I've been working on remixing this song, perhaps you'll like the next one better.

[OMG porno porn]

OMG porno porn!

The beggining sounded like something like you would hear in a porn, but then it kinda went to club music. Still... its not bad.

grandman1023 responds:

thanx alot i need as many comments to keep up with approving my songs

[F-Zero X - Silence]

amazing song!

I love this song. Wonderfully done! I think the bass was a little loud in the main melody parts, but other than that it is a pretty perfect remix! :)

FlameMesial responds:

Thank you man, it's nice to hear that you can get the clarity through the speakers :D

[Battle on Top]

great!

I liked it a lot. By itself I didn't really, but if ya picture lyrics in there it is good quality and could be a real song! It could be rap, but it is a lot more like a song that is sung.

Maybe tone down the melody a little bit though. At least when there is lyrics :)

Brom3 responds:

Very thx for the tip!

[/Fighting Your Reflection\ V.2]

eh...

Well, it is pretty original, but... You need to work on equalizing the guitar, I know the Fruity Slayer isnt the best, but it needs work. I could name some of the drum loops you used, and they didnt mix the best. It wasn't to bad, but it didnt sound that smooth either. ;)

SuperTonic64 responds:

I know there is some problems with this piece, since this is the first techno song I have ever written. However, I am writing techno now to get better at things like equalizing and mastering for my classical music. :)

Thanks for your review! ^_^ I'll be sure to take your suggestions in mind the next time I write techno. :)

~Smartpoetic

[<(epic)> [the right one]]

that one synth,

everything was good in that song... except for that synth that started off the song. If that was changed, and the late beat was a little more enphasized, it would be the best!

MadChris responds:

i changed the synth and added a little filler sound. see if its any better on my myspace. myspace.com/djnegoshiate

[Freeway Entrance]

nice!

Nice loop! But, I felt that every 4 beats were somewhat seperated. Pretty good though.

Dereks responds:

Thanks AlertG for reviewing, actually the main melody repeat every 4 beats, that's why you felt this.