alertG's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[<MWA> Skittles on Crack]

Great

Great mix of upbeat but yet calm. Very chill track good work. Its on my ipod D:

mjattie responds:

nice

[Change of Plans]

hah!

If only this had much better compression. great work here. i love it.

I agree about the cymbals too. Hopefully when its better mastered they dont get in the way. ;)

Or4nges responds:

I don't think i'll ever return to this song. It was like 7 months ago. Hell I don't think I even EQ'd back then haha. Glad you like it though, I am kind of fond of it :)

[Actualized]

intro

intro was amazing. almost reminded me of the simpsons, but better.

It all sounded good, though i think in parts, not piano though, the melody seemed to not flow the best. Otherwise perfect. ;)

sumguy720 responds:

Damn it! I was hoping no one would notice. Like twenty minutes after I wrote it I was like, aww hell this has the same first five to seven notes as the simpsons intro.

Thank for Review! Much good tidings and stronger!

[Daylight Train Crossing]

oh hey

Nice work getting it in the game btw. Guess I should review your track haha.

I think it tends to almost get repetitive. It changes up at just the right time though.

Yodamanjaro responds:

Yeah thanks man, that's what I do...wait until the last minute. haha thanks for taking time out of your day to review me!

[Giant Flaming Wall of Doo]

oh hey look who it is

Its alright. Though the intro is not as much my favorite. Not as memerable.

Though the rest of it is interesting. Good work so far.

ErikMcClure responds:

how did you even find this D:

[PdGAudio - Lavender Town Remix]

pretty good

This sounds to me more like a song i would hear in a game, than just listening to while doing things. (which makes sense, and is great if thats what you are going for)

If thats not what you were going for, then the wobble did not have enough precense to sound as intense. So good work!

Qelaion responds:

Haha, thanks. I was going for a little bit of my own feel, as well as some aspects
from the original song, and I think I got those nailed down pretty good.

reread the review, and I see what you mean. Yeah, this song's more meant to be played in the background on loop while playing a game, etc.

[Disruptive Zebra]

hmm

very nice melody, but mastering needs some work. I would work on the hat, and also giving the main melody more presence but not too much. Maybe it needs more seperation too? hard to tell.

just telling you that the melody is better than those generic dance tracks uploaded here that annoy the hell out of me. And for example, the effect at 1:55 is louder than the synth? the synth should be as there as that effect is! ;)

ElectroHarbour responds:

Yep, I didn't even attempt to master this song when I made it. I agree the main lead is kinda flat sounding.

Thanks very much for your input!

:D

[<< - DOMINATOR - >>]

i like it

I like this style of deep house, especially since most deep house I have listened to i didnt like. Bravo

Yodamanjaro responds:

Thanks man!

[Chs - I Will Not Fail!]

hrm well

the only thing i dont like, is the sound of that bass guitar. I think it needs a little more work on balancing... which now reading your commentarty.... lol.

I think the treble in the bass/background guitar is a little distacting for me. I want to concentrate on the nice melody!

Ogilvietheblue responds:

LOL!

[liquid dnb work in progress]

pretty good

very nice balance. im liking the pad choice as well. very melow. nice work.

Kalapsia responds:

thanks bruva