alertG's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Outspoken]

id say...

its either funk or miscellaneous in my opinion. ;P

its different. at first i thought it was really random, but it actually had some ambience melody type of thing to it. though it sounds like it might be loops. :/ i dont think the "ghostly" type instrument blended the best. maybe if it blended better the track would sound better ;) i think it needs some work, but its not too bad.

themeatiscoming responds:

Thanks for the comment. Yea now that I'm listening to it again I think does sound a little like funk. I'm trying a little bit of my different style so I haven't yet perfected it and as for the loop sound its just the beats. Makes it easier for to loop the beat rather than just keep plucking it along. Once again keep listening and hopefully it will become better thanks again.

[[T] Techno Dance Mix]

cool

definately not my style... but definately a good track! great for flashes and whatever. has a happy tune to it which people like. it sounds like a retro video game kinda track with bass to me. and would prolly go well with a flash like that.

good job.

tomashcu responds:

THAT WAS A GOOD REVIEW I MUST SAY

AND THANKS alertG

-Tomashcu-

[.X. Welcome To The Matrix]

i like this one

what does it is all of the fading and modulation of the synths, in the intro mostly. Though i would have liked a little better ending. the middle was pretty good, but i think it could have became a little better after a little. but instead it went to the piano to end.

but i like this a lot better than your 'fly away'. its pretty good.

XenoxX responds:

Sorry lol I love the Piano!!! Thanks for the review!

[Reliving demo]

interesting stuff

its different, but definately worthy of a better score than 2.5. The intro was funky and the song all together is different, but it is a different style. I like the uniqueness of it. its not really me, but i dont think its all that bad. i think it gets pretty good later. good job on making it unique

Darren-M responds:

thank you! i appreciate the acknowledgment

[<DjR> Heading Home]

hmmmm

i think that the begining could have flowed a little better. and i thought that the chorus could have had better and prolly higher synths when it came in from the intro. cause otherwise theres not too much difference. cause it just doesnt seem as 'epic' or it doesnt stand out as much to me. but keep working on it

Rawmin responds:

Hmm thanks for the consstructive critism and and the 8!

[[T] .:_Trance Dance_:.]

i think

it needed to be open a little more. cause it sounded low quality, but its not really... but i think you deserve more than <2.3 that you have now. cause the later part is pretty cool, but it just doesnt seem like trance cause theres barely a steady bassline. i would make it ambient

tomashcu responds:

yeah im just not in the zone with trance yet well ill have to keep trying cus yeah its my first so you knoe! yeh and its still on 2.3 after like 2 days lol

-Tomashcu-

[X.-Happy Muffin Song-. (Demo)]

haha

i didnt expect this from a song title that says happy muffin. but it is really cool so far. so definately work on it some more and make a full thing.

my only suggestion is to at :36 to make that point a little more dramatic coming in. cause then it feels more powerful. good work

XenoxX responds:

I will do my best lol!!!! Thanks for the review!

[E-par in the sun(preview)]

it was cool but

i think because the crowd stayed in wayyy too long after the transition, that it takes away from the main part of the song.

its not my style, but i think its really good for that kind of track! just instead of crowd add some more percussion, but not too much or too hard. ;) good work.

Meisel responds:

i will probably go for a more subtle approach on the crowds then in its current state. this is an early draft and i will try different styles and see what is most appreciated and what i prefer. Your ideas is taken in consideration, thx for the review!

[Redemption - P2]

D-:

i was just waiting for this to open up into an awesome melody and higher synths. like at 1:51 i was expecting the bass to stay and get louder and synths and just... awesomeness, but instead it just dragged on....

i think that this one was EQed better, but I would only like it if it faded into the crazy awesome chorus at 1:51. :P still good work so far.

[We Will Fuck You]

we will fuck you

unless you're a dude