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[[LK] Euphoria]

haha

i liked 1:25 lol. but maybe thats cause i like more trance than dance. the song was pretty good. and i like that you mixed it up cause otherwise it just seems like a lot of the other dance songs. ;)

pretty good!

LK412 responds:

Thats what i was going for!

Thanks a lot for the review!

[Fabled Song (SSF)]

i think its pretty good

i like it as an ambient-like piece. like people said before, its haunting. but a soft style. I like the melody a lot. good job on this!

can be a sad ending song, or mysterious begining. very nice.

[{Dj-L} The Evil Project]

kinda random

some of the parts change kinda randomly. the bass is pretty deep, its alright.

the intro is okay, except the synth kinda "intrudes" into the song. not much transition. the sound that comes in at :21 comes for 16 beats and then drops, then comes back for 32, but it seems to come and go randomly and sound repetative in my opinion.

at 1:28, though, it seems more organized. that part is better to me. i think the song could just use a little more organization and transitions. i do hear the effect placed between them, which is good, but the instruments don't fade out or anything, they just cut ;) and finally, that bassline is very repetative in my opinion.

im not telling you to change everything, but im just making suggestions. i thought this was a really random piece ;)

[Snapdragon]

Unlike Foxtrot-Zero

I thought the guitar was not bad. This is like an ambientlike trance peice so, for me, i wouldn't just listen to it because I feel like it, it needs to be with a movie or game.

The build at 28 didn't lead into something really exciting, just the main part of the song. So, it could be used for a game, or even a movie.

otherwise I get bored of the song quite early, and it doesn't change very much throughout the song. but its pretty good.

[Frozen Words]

lol

before i read the description thats what i thought of.

anyway, its not that bad of a song. im a fan of the main bond melody part, but the other part just didnt go well with the main melody, personally. it sounds pretty good, but in my opinion if the upbeat part went more with the main melody it would be much better ;)

maybe its just my personal preference.,

[Sitar Star]

lol

its funny

rockyace42 responds:

Thanks, but I didn't think this was funny one bit. Oh well, I'll take a 9 no matter what! :)

[Rice of Newgounds]

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[Fall into a dream]

ic ic

well, it seems to go around a simple melody pretty much the whole time, so it gets kinda repetative. also, it sounds like an arpeggio is used for a lot of the instruments too. and also some default instruments. and finally, some transitions would be good between the parts of the song.

theres just some pointers. i hope that helps you ;)

SublimeJess responds:

Thanks for the constructive critisim.
I make my songs bit by bit, So I dont know any shortcuts and such. So it makes it hard for me to configure what to do. After I make a song I think about things that would make it sound better but, I can never find the right sound to make it perfect lol
I use fl studio, I just figured out a little bit one day. I know you can do pretty much anything with that program. Figuring it out on your own is the hard part though lol

[::: Feel The Gain :::]

i like this better

i like this better than the other songs from artists like bounc3. the other ones are too generic and similar.

this one is good. good job on it!

[Gelatin Crusaders (A->N)]

pretty nice

i dont know why but it is kinda funny haha. i thought that the voice could have been blended with the song a tiny bit better, but its not bad.

anyway, rate my new?

ApproachingNirvana responds:

Thanks for the comments! We'll check out your song when we get some time!