to be honest
Congrats on the top 5, and i like the message its trying to bring, but this was pretty bad to be honest.
The intro seemed promising. Yes repetitive, but worthy to be able to ragain itself.
However, it ended up sounding like some halfway-decent clubbing music with some samples of the song thrown in. Most the transitions didnt flow, and most of the melodies did not match the sample, which makes the sample useless. Also, parts of the 'club' music if you will, didnt have good melody lines.
And the snare/clap like sound in the first bass part was VERY annoying. Maybe good as an intro, but not as a main part.
Maybe some would like this, but after you hear enough electronic music, this really does need a lot of work. But it has potential. And I am critiqueing it alot since it got top 5. Good luck with more music though!