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wow

I consider this to be great work. Very high placement in the portal!

But the song.... sucks ass HAHA

Tails-Lock responds:

...your review sucks arse.

I want constructive criticism, not rubbish insults or useless praise, two things your review had.

tone down the gritty

bring the snare up a bit

lower the wobbling grit

???????

profit
LOL DISREGARD THAT I MAEK... owait

SteakJohnson responds:

snare def needs an upgrade, and the hats have too much treble

love it

it does sound like mau5, but i like this cause it has more atmosphere. Its amazing.

I also love the melody that you made with this, and leading to a progressive section and back to the atmosphere would be amazing.

Work on this. Definitely cool

momboom1 responds:

Thanks :D. I'm trying to work on it but I don't have that much experience in the trance genre. It's a working progress. <3

to be honest

Congrats on the top 5, and i like the message its trying to bring, but this was pretty bad to be honest.

The intro seemed promising. Yes repetitive, but worthy to be able to ragain itself.

However, it ended up sounding like some halfway-decent clubbing music with some samples of the song thrown in. Most the transitions didnt flow, and most of the melodies did not match the sample, which makes the sample useless. Also, parts of the 'club' music if you will, didnt have good melody lines.
And the snare/clap like sound in the first bass part was VERY annoying. Maybe good as an intro, but not as a main part.

Maybe some would like this, but after you hear enough electronic music, this really does need a lot of work. But it has potential. And I am critiqueing it alot since it got top 5. Good luck with more music though!

Mans0n responds:

thanks for the advice man i will work to fix a few things

Dubstep

Cheers for the listen xD

djhoohaa responds:

haha xD

absolutely

The pads and strings with the dubstep make the track so much more dramatic. I love it.

thanks for uploading it here.
-a

mr-jazzman responds:

No problem man, glad you like it! =D Strings and pads are definitely nice! ;)

heh

I like the transitions that are there. pretty good job. and youre right it does sound unfinished. But pretty decent in most parts.

i guess people like it on here too so thumbs up! some butthurt guy(s) are 0 bombing for whatever reason.

DJDela responds:

thank you for reviewing

i think

you have a fresh perspective on these genres. Which makes your music so good, because not only are you good at it, but you do something different than the norm but in a good way. (Ive heard a lot of stuff I did not like at all). So all the best on getting some attention. youre a great artist and this is no exception

though, it did sound like it was a little light on the treble on the wobble, and the normal snare seemed a bit quiet, but maybe thats just me or because its in wip.

amazing sir

I think the issues are so unnoticable it is good how it is for a newgrounds track.

thanks for uploading this!

I am a Game Programmer/Designer, Web Devolper, and make trance/dnb/techno/ etc. I do use FL studio to make my music. Fav genres: house, dnb, alt rock, dub, techno. GO TO MY GAME SITE!

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