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[[CS] TetrisHardcoreRemiX]

i totally agree

i dont like basshunter, despite it being like, the only artist for dance that people know about in the US. (at least around where i live...sub-urban)

this remix is great! I don't think its the best rave song ever, but it certainly beats a lot of them! great job and keep it up

~a

Unrl responds:

Mmmhmm. thanks for the support!

[Fredgy - Dream Away]

mm ya

cool, but i agree with bjra. i think the bass is okay for the beginning, but if you leave the beginning like that, I think the bass should really kick later in the song to bring the full effect.

overall I think you have a very nice start :o . I would work on the bass a little and maybe a little on the main parts since it seems to get a little repetitive... at least for me. ;)

Fredgy responds:

ye, the bass has always been a problem for me :p
btw, could you say where you think it gets repetitive please ? ^^

[Fredgy - Eurodancer {Remix}]

i thought it was okay

I thought it could have been more energetic for the build it had in the begining personally. Pretty nice melody, but i think it could have flowed a LOT better ;)

pretty good...

Fredgy responds:

thanks

[Restless Act:Zero]

sounds good as a video game track

i like it. I would have liked it more if it broke out into a wicked fast drum beat at 1:00, but of course that is just my preference. It still does sound really cool.

Very mysterious and up-beat. And very nice quality for a game!

SecretsOfSounds responds:

Thx for the review :D it was made for a game not so much a D&B track but wtv

[Super Mario Cool Beat ;)]

not dnb :P

the beat doesnt sound like drum and bass because they are pretty slow, which makes it in the middle of video game and drum and bass.

now if you had an awesome drum beat goin on here it would be awesome as a drum and bass song ;)

tomashcu responds:

yeah lol tahnks

[Rig - Am I Cool Yet?]

and i think my songs are good

i like some of my melodies, but this just blows them away. its funny cause i like the aggressive/intense music. but you are just so good at it. great work here.

im surprised you arent that well known... or are you. i would go to what ever club ur at to go crazy to an intense song like this

awesome

Rig responds:

Club Cardboard?
lol

[!~[Ironclad]~!]

better than the another idea

this sounds a bit better, but i still feel that it is too repetitive. it could be like that for a while into the song, but after a over a minute into the song, there wasnt any change to the melody, or any harmony changes either. the beat changed a little, but went right back.

dont get me wrong, its a pretty cool beat you got here, however, i might of liked a loop of this better than this song version because of the repetitiveness :P lol

anyway, pretty awesome beats you have goin though!

~alerted

MmmCake responds:

thanks for the review! :D

[!~[Another Idea]~!]

haha

i do that all the time. i think that the intro could have been a little better, and it seemed like that one bassy instrument has a little too much bass. i think the beat is a little repetitive as well.

but aside from all that criticsm, i dont think its too bad it sound pretty cool, but i think it could be more balanced and less repetitive ;)

pretty good! 4/5 8/10

p.s. could you review my most recent? D:

MmmCake responds:

lol thanks! yeah, ill review yours =D

[Megaman X5 (Final Stage)]

heh

Well, i can hear a lot of presets in here. The beat loop, the slayer, and the background synth. I mean, its not too bad since you put it together and it flows. but i would go back and work on remaking this with your own beats and maybe 3x Osc with fast dist or something in place of the guitar, or add some delay/reverb to the guitar.

This could also use some EQing and balance. The guitar was a little loud in one part, and other parts could be toned up or down. Some variation to the beat would be good too.

Im not trying to sound too harsh or anything, im just pointing out how you could improve with your music. ;) in time you can look back at older work and see how you could greatly improve it and make it much much better! keep it up.

7/10 4/5

SonicJ responds:

Hey, I accept any help :p
about the Eqing, I have no idea how to do that, could you help me out with that :D ? thanks for taking the time to review, I appreciate it :]

[Kazmo - Far Side of the Moon]

this is great

very smooth and ambient sounding. very clear instruments used. it sounds very nice! i like some of the effects you did in it as well.

i dont think it is very full of energy because i feel that it is more relaxing. but it sounds really awesome as a relaxing song. great work here!

....and very professional might i add

Kazmo responds:

Haha thanks, I just said it was full of energy in a sense that it's always going somewhere.

Thanks again!