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[Alchemy]

cool

is this powerhouse? thats what i would name it, not sure if this is what it is.

full of energy. i like it. though i do think that the intro and the ending could be improved, and not so boring with just a kick. a couple of effects in those parts would be nice.

i do like the melody here. its fun :)

VelociD responds:

Alright, alright.
You guys want more FX, i get it :P
I'll see what I can do next time.

Thx for your reviews!

[[LiQ] Album (DnB)]

pretty cool!

i think that main synth (mostly at :50+) could be a little quiter though. imo i think its overpowering. the melody is pretty cool though. especially in the beggining. i like how it slows down too. the melody is good.

pretty good.

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[Oli - Insert random title here]

i think it did

i think the melody could flow a tiny bit better, but it is still pretty good. the only thing i really notice is that the beat seems a bit repetative throughout the song. but it is still pretty good, and the intro is pretty sweet. nice job

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[neurofunk3]

interesting

i dont think its too bad. that instrument at 1:04 i think is a bit loud. imo it makes the melody seem a bit little jumbled. i would lower that volume. otherwise i think its pretty good for the type of genre.

pretty cool

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[Ghosts, You Say]

niiice

this is interesting... i like it. i like the instruments used. theyre pretty good and effective here. the intro is pretty strong as well.

pretty good!

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[-Amnesia-]

i think its good

i think that the pad is a tad too loud and the background hat/snare should be a tad louder.

but other than that i like the melody and all it sounds really good. this got underrated :/

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[Q7...]

pretty simple

but the effects are good near the end. its good, but i think it could stand out a little more, if you know what i mean. maybe some other effect in there thats a little louder or something, to mix it up a little more ;)

[ZeldaOOT-Windmill(MyRemix)]

it has been done many times here..

but this one isnt too bad. There just isnt anything really interesting changed with it. im sure if you searched you would find some that added pads, other synths, etc.

but theres nothing wrong with this one, just saying theres not much difference ;) it sounds pretty good though

poolplayermaster responds:

I didn't want to mess with this one too much but i changed a few things other then just the fact that i switched between it being link and crazy guy playing it and then harmonizing at the end that was my main focus

[MS - Caution]

well see...

it has (what i like to call beginner) melody that goes E...F...G...F... etc etc.

i would say try holding the E of the pad over and over instead and change some other background synth or melody. and then maybe after the last half of the 4th repeat (14th beat), have to beats of F or G or something else.

just a suggestion, but i think it would go a long way. the pads and everything sounds amazing, it just needs a better melody in my opinion.

Malefactor responds:

Yes it does have a beginner melody :D I am not that good yet haha. I didn't take that much time to experiment with other possibilities I just threw that in there and thought it sounded very good! Thanks for the tips I will try them out and make a different version if I can find the time.

Thanks for the review :D!!

[MS - Your World On Shrooms]

:( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(

doooood. Make a new version because this is amazing!

have it so that 0:32 goes into an amazing dnb beat with the instruments with it, but the classic "kick snare kick kick snare". Because not only would that go to the top of the lists, it would actually sound really professional.

(the reason why i say to make a new one, is because maybe you wanted this one to sound like this).

but im serious you should do that. and if you do i will download it and play it in my car like instantly lol. do it!

Malefactor responds:

Haha, thanks for the review again :D!

That sounds like a good idea to me too, I wasn't really sure what i was doing i was just throwing in crazy beats and shit :D
I'll look into updating this one as well!

Thanks again!