pretty good.
i like that effect the 1st and 3rd times, but its too loud and out of place for the 2nd one IMO. The volumes are a little better.
The only thing is though, is that i was looking for it to have an accompanying hi synth with the melody before it to come into an Amazing melody. But instead, it 'built-up' to a calm part. I really think you should make it have more of a 'climax'. ;)
2:00 is good cause it goes back to a solid bass. but at 2:33, what I WOULD do(if it were me), take out the synths and just have a bassline for the ending, and take out that loud effect at the end. but it is your song, i just like that. this ending seems kinda weird for me ;)
pretty good, but i think it could use a little more work